T1 Writing

We are learning to...
·      write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced
·      have an opening statement that tells who, what and where
·      write the events in the order they happened

·      have a conclusion or personal response

The Tryathlon

I saw the Tryathlon. I ran and biked at the Tryathlon. Someone pushed me and I hurt my finger.

Teacher comment:
You have written 3 good sentences.

Next step:
Write some more detail in your work.

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