We
are learning to...
·
write a personal recount about something
we have done or experienced
Criteria:
·
have
an opening statement that tells who, what and where
·
write the events in the order they
happened
·
have a conclusion or personal response
The Tryathlon
I saw the Tryathlon. I ran and biked at the Tryathlon. Someone pushed me and I hurt my finger.
Teacher comment:
You have written 3 good sentences.
Next step:
Write some more detail in your work.
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